hey sorry i took so long to respond, usually when i ask someone to look at something i want more than its nice, i want critical feedback to improve so i'm assuming that's what you want, i hope. i only saw it once and my impression was the look and imagery were pro, i am aware of the zietgiest movement and a lot of what is called conspiracy theory so the subject matter was familiar to me but it might not be to someone else, a narrative thread would have helped, i thought the vocals of the people protesting was more interesting than the footage of them and would have like to hear you play with it in the sound track(narrative thread), and maybe a add dramatic pause or two to delineate the middle and work up to the end ...hope that was helpful, i hope new friend :-D
At 10:56am on September 23, 2011, aixa kendrick said…
hey, blessings! come through if u r in the area : )
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Hope to see you at Afro fest this year
Thank you Daniel
Peace no, problem! Im sorry that i am so late in responding to you : )
hey, blessings! come through if u r in the area : )
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